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I lost a friend today, and my heart will never heal.
I almost cried, though I expect to cry later, when it sets in.
I lost a friend today, and I don't know how to deal.
I almost lied, but that would be wrong, though I don't believe in sin.

I lost a friend today, and my days will never be the same
I almost choked, though I expect it will happen, when I am alone
I lost a friend today, and I will miss our secret game
I almost broke, but it is coming, from my eyes to my bones

I lost a friend today, and my heart will never heal.
I almost abide, though my mind says no, I can't breathe in air
I lost a friend today, and this poem is how I will deal
I almost cried, at the beginning, but now I feel the tears.
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For my grandfathers, and my grandmothers. Also, a friend I lost. In the case of my friend, he didn't die, and we are again friends.

RIP Grandpa and Grandpa Hermary. RIP Grandma and Grandpa Provost.
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Nomuit-Jargon Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's...it's a good poem. All I'm willing to say right now is that it should be beginning*, not begining...But yes, a good poem...
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you.

Well dang. Thank you! I fixed it. :)
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Nomuit-Jargon Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...The last line. The last line is exceptionally powerful.
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you.
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FoxTrotRecruit114 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
I lot someone last week who was close. This really helped cope a little bit.
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Professional Writer
I am so sorry for your loss. I am glad I helped in some way. :hug:
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Skullcandy1995 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student
OH poor you :(
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nldarkstripe Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
wow this is so beautiful!
I understand that your friend is fine, and that he didnt die (knock on wood) but you made it feel so... REAL! GREAT JOB!!! :D
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you! :)
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nldarkstripe Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
Your very welcome! Its just... BEAUTIFUL!!
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ChynnaMJ Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Losing a friend is equal to feeling heart break from a lover...but depending on the situation sometimes its more
personal. If you mean your friend died then I am really sorry for your loss.
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papichulo34 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
I totally agree with your statement ChynnaMJ! The so called "best friend" I lost felt so much worse than a heart break because it was indeed so personal. that person was my human diary.. she knew EVERYTHING about me.. my ups, my downs, things no one else understood or cared about. and then, BOOM.. from one day to the next she changed and was gone.. like that.. no real warning.. she simply vanished and now it's like we never even met.. It is trully heart breaking in a totally different and worse sort of way.. and now the new Best Friend I have is almost doing the very same thing! GRR!!!
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you. No, he is alive, and I hope well.

I agree. Love is sometimes pushed forth to be forever, but friendship, I think, should be just as highly prized.
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DayIDiedIsDayILived Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
a distant friend of mine passed away last year... though you might not mean it that way, i hope you will feel better.
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
I am so sorry for your loss. :( Thank you, and may time also help you heal.
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DayIDiedIsDayILived Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013   Writer
thanks
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013   Writer
how did ur friend died? :( im soo sorry for ur loss <3
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
He didn't die, though I suppose in a way he did, since we discovered things about each other that seemed to get in the way. It was a long time ago, and we've begun to talk again. I hope, maybe, we'll grow back together.
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013   Writer
that good :)
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lolbunny330 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
so sad :sad: hope you feel better
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you.
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Skullcandy1995 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student
i hope no one "love" this poem ...cause its to sad
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Professional Writer
You can love something because it is sad. But I think I know what you mean.
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Skullcandy1995 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student
i have love a friend who where very near me
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Professional Writer
I'm sorry for your loss. :hug:
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:iconblackrockshooterfan9:
A really good friend of mine stopped being my friend last month...I still miss her and hope that one day we will be friends again.
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
I am sad to hear this. I hope you and she will find your way back to friendship.
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Yeah I hope..
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papichulo34 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
been there many a times my friend.. and it's BS what they say that time heals all wounds.. It doesn't, it just makes it easier to forget for a while..
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Yes. I can't remember who said it, but she said, paraphrased: "Time does not heal wounds. It simply scars them over so we may live."
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papichulo34 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
that is very true. Sorry for the late reply. I hope time helps me to live, rather than dwell on things that I cannot change nor bring back.. does that make sense?
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Professional Writer
Yes it does make sense. No worries on the late reply :)
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papichulo34 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
glad I can make sense, since lately nothing makes sense to me..
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Professional Writer
:( I'm sorry to hear about it. Wanna talk?
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papichulo34 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
that would be awesome.. please email me at usmcpapi720@gmail.com

thanks..
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Professional Writer
I've sent an email.
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914four Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I lost a friend to cancer in December, you have my deepest sympathy. The best advice I can give you is, remember them as they lived, not as they died. "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." - Theodor Seuss Geisel (aka Dr Seuss)
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Professional Writer
I'm so sorry :( You also have mine.

Mine was my grandpas, also to cancer. It was a long time ago. One I can't even remember much about him except we would sneak chocolate cake when my grandmother wasn't looking :) The other grandfather I was blessed to know him until I was fourteen, then he sadly had to move on. He was a retired schoolteacher and he instilled the love of learning in me.

That is a beautiful quote.
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914four Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. I collect quotes, mostly because others have often said what I feel far more eloquently than I ever could. Here is another to help you remember your grandfathers by: "The secret to immortality is to live a life worth remembering." - Bruce Lee
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Professional Writer
:D You're welcome.
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Crazywith80s Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh dear D': hope you got over the loss :huggle:
lovely poem by the way :)
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
:hug:

Amazingly, I did. I thought I would never do so, but time - well, he doesn't lesson the pain so much as he dulls it. It's still there, fresh, just out of reach. If that makes sense.

Thank you.
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Crazywith80s Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, it does make sense :) and I'm glad to hear that you're getting better ^^
it's like a bitter-sweet pain, the bitterness of the loss and the sweetness of the good memories :huggle:
^ hope you don't find this bothering ^^;

you're very much welcome :glomp: and I love poems which are spoken from the heart :)
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Professional Writer
I'm glad. I find it hard to articulate what I want. :phew:

I don't find it bothersome at all. :D I love to talk XD, light stuff, heavy stuff, random stuff that no one can follow if their lives depended on it... :squee:

It helps to chat about things, even if they hurt. :nod:

:huggle:
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Crazywith80s Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Naah, it's okay; I love philosophical things like that :) ^^

yeah me too! :D
chatting is a very nice way to relief yourself from stress/sadness/over excitement/etc and all sorts of overdosed emotions :la::la:

:glomp:
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Professional Writer
:glomp:

I love philosophical things as well. I'd rather think my way out of something than burst through it. Of course, sometimes the best course of action is to "don't think, just do..."
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Crazywith80s Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah ^^
and sorry for the late reply ^^; it's just y'know how school absorbs your life little by little :XD:

so, how's school/work? Hope it's not pressuring you too much :) school is getting harder and harder these days, I have maths quiz tomorrow and I realllly wish something would happen so it would be cancelled (it's not that I didn't study, I just don't feel like thinking these days :/ )
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Professional Writer
No worries! :)

Works good. I mean, it's there, and for something that has to be done, it's alright. I'd rather face a dragon, though XD

I get that sometimes too. Just want to zone out and relax. :relax: I hope you did good on your test.
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ToaTepsak Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
So beautiful, it made me wanna cry~.....
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you, and sorry for that :hug:
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