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I lost a friend today, and my heart will never heal.
I almost cried, though I expect to cry later, when it sets in.
I lost a friend today, and I don't know how to deal.
I almost lied, but that would be wrong, though I don't believe in sin.

I lost a friend today, and my days will never be the same
I almost choked, though I expect it will happen, when I am alone
I lost a friend today, and I will miss our secret game
I almost broke, but it is coming, from my eyes to my bones

I lost a friend today, and my heart will never heal.
I almost abide, though my mind says no, I can't breathe in air
I lost a friend today, and this poem is how I will deal
I almost cried, at the beginning, but now I feel the tears.
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For my grandfathers, and my grandmothers. Also, a friend I lost. In the case of my friend, he didn't die, and we are again friends.

RIP Grandpa and Grandpa Hermary. RIP Grandma and Grandpa Provost.
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Nomuit-Jargon Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's...it's a good poem. All I'm willing to say right now is that it should be beginning*, not begining...But yes, a good poem...
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AnnaGladue Oct 3, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you.

Well dang. Thank you! I fixed it. :)
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:iconnomuit-jargon:
Nomuit-Jargon Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...The last line. The last line is exceptionally powerful.
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AnnaGladue Oct 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you.
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:iconfoxtrotrecruit114:
I lot someone last week who was close. This really helped cope a little bit.
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AnnaGladue Jun 6, 2013  Professional Writer
I am so sorry for your loss. I am glad I helped in some way. :hug:
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Skullcandy1995 Apr 21, 2013  Student
OH poor you :(
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:iconnldarkstripe:
wow this is so beautiful!
I understand that your friend is fine, and that he didnt die (knock on wood) but you made it feel so... REAL! GREAT JOB!!! :D
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AnnaGladue Mar 24, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you! :)
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:iconnldarkstripe:
Your very welcome! Its just... BEAUTIFUL!!
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